bella wiltshire

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Unwanted Daughter - Poem by bella wiltshire

She cries at night holding onto her pillow tight tears roll down her face
she whispers 'where are u mum i need u'
she wipes away the tears, picks up a blade she say 2 herself 'its time to end this pain'
she cuts her wrist, watchs the blood drip
she whispers 2 herself 'i loved u mum but that wasnt good enough so now im here killin myself'
as she lays dere dying broken inside while she sits there crying
she whispers 'i loved u mum maybe u might care once im gone'
those were her last words
her dad came in 4 hours later that night he saw her laying there in a pool of blood and begin to cry
at the funeral the next week people cried & sobbed over her
but there was 1 person still standing strong not crying a weep
which was her mum


Comments about Unwanted Daughter by bella wiltshire

  • Gold Star - 13,591 Points Lyn Paul (3/25/2014 8:42:00 AM)

    Hello Bella moving words that would be so hard to write. So I thank you for sharing. For your words really can help others. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 36,724 Points Gajanan Mishra (3/24/2014 11:53:00 PM)

    very fine writing, thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 24, 2014

Poem Edited: Tuesday, March 25, 2014


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