Unwanted Love Poem by Samantha chapman

Unwanted Love

Rating: 5.0


Penetrating shard’s of her invading my very sole,
Never granted access to the part that makes her whole,
My ecstasy from her merest touch,
Relinquished pride hurting me so much,
Finite affection she permitted me,
My devotion will always be,
Complete rapture formed by just one kiss,
Tortured by unbound passion missed,
Intensity she can never feel for me.

This unquestioned loyalty my only defenses,
Her enchanting mind so profoundly intense,
The mystery of her truth evades but seduces me,
Solving her enigma my heart felt plea,
My unrelenting adulation for her blocked,
Her beautiful heart embroiled and locked,
In what pain I could not have known,
Why must I keep brutalizing my own,
My love never will be embraced,

Ones the platonic façade had been dropped,
We shared our lusting bodies we could not be stopped,
After the secret’s had been told,
She lay in my bed naked, fallow, cold,
Now she knows, She keeps away,
Oh god I wish she wanted to stay,
She will not talk, What could she say,
RELATIONSHIP NEVER!
FRIENDSHIP FOREVER?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ellen Saunders 13 June 2009

I really liked this one! Very passionate, lovely ^.^ Ending is a tinyyyy bit of a let down though.: P I think a nice subtle, less blatant one would have held more power (no offense! ! !) . However, blatancy can work well for a bear-all, heart-on-sleeve type of writing - so that can be good for you :) . But again, it was really, really good and i liked it ^.^ keep it up! !

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