Upside Down Love 987 Poem by DAVID GERARDINO
Upside Down Love 987
I felt giant with feeling,
puzzled and out of place,
like a empty vessel with out
engine, and a baggage ticket
torn in two.I thought how easy
it is to contradict one self.almost
like jumping into a pool, with out
water, almost i thought like falling
in love, only to find the heart broken
and turned to stone, and you and me
looking like spectators in this thing
called love.
Your poems always seem to be somewhat cryptic to me........yet, their point is usually clear somehow. Very nice. Sincerely, Mary
almost flawless poetry david very pleasing for you and the people who read it Warm regards AJS
Very Nice Poem David. Liked ' You and me looking like spectators..'. Thank you.
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I would like to translate this poem
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Hi David, great poem, I can relate to this too. I guess I am in the wrong mood to read your poetry. I feel the same way. Excellent poem, It is heart felt. Take care.