Urbanity Poem by M.J. Lemon

Urbanity

Rating: 4.9


People in this city come and go
Buildings walk away
Carried to the landfills

A neighbour reclaims sod
Placing old boards and bricks together
Births makeshift living space

Before any earthquake strikes
Taxes take, authorities take
What greater change can-
any disaster make?

Monday, September 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: survival
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Melvina Germain 19 October 2015

Perhaps a disaster is exactly what is needed to begin anew, taking away from all old structures, paid out by insurance companies leaving the individual to a brand new start. All taxes paid up, move forward into a new light. Your poem presents a lot of food for thought...Fantastic...10

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Richard Wlodarski 18 October 2022

Personal disasters can so totally devastate us as to lead to severe depression. Or so much growth can result that will indeed move mountains. I really love this poem, my friend!

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Valsa George 07 October 2017

With every disaster like a hurricane or an earthquake, there will be untold destruction and people who have lost their houses can now afford only makeshift houses and that too in landfills! Usually its effect will be felt more in urban areas where there is a floating population! However survival becomes an ordeal with every disaster! You have conveyed so much!

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Mj Lemon 07 October 2017

Thank you so much, Valsa. The disasters, as you say, can be great or small. Sometimes the ones with the most devastating impact are extremely personal.

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Terry Craddock 05 February 2017

'People in this city come and go Buildings walk away Carried to the landfills' this is brilliant, the entire poem is brilliant, especially taxes and authorities out taking earthquakes, puts government and civil authority damage disasters into perspective

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Mj Lemon 06 February 2017

Thank you so much, Terry. Government action (or inaction) can indeed accomplish what natural disasters do.

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 January 2017

Hustle and bustle! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mj Lemon 26 January 2017

Thank you, Edward. Thanks so much for stopping by.

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Susan Williams 17 August 2016

Buildings walk away Carried to the landfills- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - that is so visual- - so heartbreaking in its own way because buildings are inhabited with memories- -yet we go on, building more, building better, building higher and the landfills continue growing higher as well. fascinating write.

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Mj Lemon 27 August 2016

Thank you so much, Susan. And those landfills- -they seem to grow faster than the buildings.

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