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Close you eyes baby
Let me lead you there
Breathe in this sensual air
Feel the fire of desire
Build up inside
Please baby, don't hide
It's not about swallowin' pride
I'm not going to bribe you
Willingness is the key
Baby trust me, you'll see

These are the words he said
While lying on my bed
I melted into his fiery touch
Rapturing eyes had me hypnotized
He had me in his containment
Just as he opened the vent
~*~*~~*EXHALE! *~*~*~
Gates open, dismissing me from eternal Hell!

With every captavating tingle
It didn't matter that I was single
Instantly without contious
Became his subservient
I couldn't back out even if I wanted to
My desire, my predominations,
Don't! You wouldn't like me to judge you!

Obliterated this moment of ecstasy
Can't you see,
The enchantment I was drawn to
Magnetism and his charm
Made my body erotically spew
He never meant to harm
Torture was part of the deal
Broke that leash, for real
Wont take me long to heal!

Imagination brought forth this poem
While I sat here this Friday afternoon @ home!
Gathering another form of intoxication
Rejecting all other forms of medication
Paradise at any means
Is right at the seams
Go to far extreames
Find peace, joy and let it go
You'll find yourself putting on a show!

Mind is similar to a dynamite
Explosive results plastering on this site!
To each it's own, for we all have that personal right!
So, when you close your eyes tonight
If your needing to escape, or silently elope
Don't give up on hope!
Let go of all righteous manners...
Who cares about the Pope! =)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ernestine Northover 01 July 2006

This is an epic ride Kristin, wonderfully constructed, momentous write. A pleasure to absorb. Very well done indeed. Keep that pen going. It's therapeutic. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Nalini Hebbar 30 June 2006

that was just lovely...i see so much positive energy in this poem...and i am happy for you...keep focused on that energy...good luck kristin...love and hugs...nalini

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KRIS...YOU'VE OUT DONE YOURSELF ONCE AGAIN...KEEP THAT PEN PUMPIN, YOUNG LADY...YOU ARE ON A POETIC RIDE OF JUSTICE! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK

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Kristin Nicole RothDavis

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Southern Oklahoma... <country gal here>
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