Vacant Eyes Poem by Bree Z Love

Vacant Eyes



I seen her vacant eyes.
Before, we called it blues.
Now, it appears outfitted in sublime cues.
Wearing cloudy plum swirls.
Sporting shady hues, my little girl.
Searching for a warm touch.
But a mother's sweet touch is asking too much.

Glistening reflections from the headlights.
She stands posed, on the side of the road,
Slightly, high and smiling as she receives the vibrations, slow.
Concentrating on how old the concrete is...under her toes.
Now, searching my eyes, she tries to distract my assumptions
And fixing words.
I do notice but she crosses over to forbid my gaze and
want; to caress those tired legs.
And help with those tattered bags.

Though it seems so strange.
A stranger with no permission to occupy such space.
But my own reflection in the headlights changed.
I was the little girl that sat at the window pane.
Wishing for a sweet homestead; a forever place.
No need to hide the pain.
Blue Skies, Fade
Those Eyes Fade.

Friday, March 2, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: girls,lost
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 March 2018

A poignant write well executed. Very touching.

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Rajnish Manga 02 March 2018

This speaks volumes about those whose quest for fulfillment of desires remains a dream forever. So sad and touching portrayal. Thanks.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 02 March 2018

Bree, such an awesome write👍👍👍

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Aldrich Suarez 02 March 2018

it is a sad poem...this is good for the die-hard blues

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Bree Z Love

Bree Z Love

Chicago, Illinois
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