Treasure Island

Azul Noir

(South Africa)

Vestigial Hope

I am hesitant to go too far too fast
To repeat not only the good, but the failures of the past
I struggle to find words to describe, not only the love I have,
but also the surreptitious fear that I hide

I fear your dulcet words come too easily
I fear your heart speaks in the absence of context
in the candor of only the moment
so I love with forbearance instead of
a love that comes gushing from me

I fear my heart is too broken to trust you implicitly
I fear that I fear unrest less than stability;
that I evoke trouble and harbor misfortune
I fear that we started this romance too late,
but that we had loved each other too soon

I fear that I will love you just to lose you again
and thereby lose my worth which rests on you now
I fear my need is more than you should care to shoulder
and that my gifts are much less than you deserve
I fear your redolent love is more than my vestigial hope

Submitted: Thursday, February 09, 2012
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  • Hans Vr (3/22/2012 7:50:00 AM)

    This is a good poem, Azul. The fear, so poetically expressed. Fear can be paralysing. That being said, I think moderation is most of the time a very wise thing. (Report) Reply

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