Victims Poem by Paul Hansford

Victims



'Trains into and out of Waterloo are subject to delay because of...
a body on the line at Basingstoke' (railway notice)
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A body on the line at Basingstoke -
the train to Waterloo has been delayed.
You'll have to wait; the plastic bag brigade
are clearing up and trying not to choke.

Commuter suicide's no news to us.
We don't suspect foul play; it's by the book.
But one more driver, terror in his look,
takes the day off, wishing he drove a bus.

Neighbours or strangers, those who saw him leap
could never know what so possessed his mind.
His unwished legacy - they long may find
the image of his death disturb their sleep.

The quiet desperation of a life
brought by that final step over the rim
to its conclusion - weep no tears for him,
his torment's over. Who will tell his wife?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Jarvis 29 June 2009

The ripple effect of this act of desperation extends to the reader through this expressive and well-crafted piece. With the rythm and impact of a speeding train, this poem leaves haunting images of the 'plastic brigade' lingering long after the final line. Potent stuff! S :)

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Sally Carter 29 June 2009

Powerful and thought provoking - it's the people left behind who suffer, and the train driver probably more than any. I have heard that some drivers are never able to work again after a suicide. The intro puts me in mind of the glib radio announcements telling us we will be inconvenienced by a motorway closure, but rarely mentioning the horror behind the words.

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