Virginity Taker Poem by Mrs. Cynosure

Virginity Taker

Rating: 5.0


I have finally found the right one
To have and to hold for all eternity
In sickness and in health
Until death do us part
I thought laying next to you that one night
Right before you took it form me that precious piece of gold
I'll never get back
The future looked bright
I thought we would never fight
I was up there for a week only for you
Just for you
So in love with you
You were the man of my world
The same one that tore it all apart
Made me what I am today
Just a whore

I use to hear whispers now they are more like screams
They remind me of my mistake
I have already taken the physical beaten
The emotional one is really not needed
I thought I learned my lesson
But the pain I felt was all to great
And that desire oh that desire
Was just too much for a barley 16 year old girl to take

I had no one to turn to
No family no friends
They all said I told you so

You asked how I was doing
And told me that you loved me
Well Kevin you took that
I didn’t give it to you
You took it from me
Coned a young girl
From her virginity
Stay away I don’t need you
And I have found some one else
Not out just for that
He’s out for me Not to be my
Virginity taker

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

wow great it reminds me of one of my poems please take a look its called TO HAVE AND TO HOLD Very nice poem

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Bill Thomas 30 January 2009

Becca, this should be a set text in every school: look how a bloke can damage a beautiful, sensitive woman like you. I weep on behalf of men who think that women are objects to be used... thank you for writing this: your voice deserves to be heard at the highest level. Bless you. Every good wish, Bill

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Sebastine Humaemo 14 December 2008

what a powerful lines Becca.....your honest words makes you divine......one of your best poems again....regards sebastine....

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 12 November 2008

U WRITE WITH A LOT OF HONESTY... KEEP IT UP...

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Drake Kinkaid 10 November 2008

Another good one I liked it as well as the others

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Saint Cynosure 04 November 2008

Beautiful and heart felt, very very good...

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Mrs. Cynosure

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Junction City Oregon
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