Virtual Waves Poem by Vidyadhar Durgekar

Virtual Waves

Rating: 5.0


Walking along the sandy beach,
With waves striding beside me,
In cool morning salty breeze,
Singing Seagulls flying over the sea;

Carrying head load of desires,
Unfulfilled year by year,
Like waves in the sea from far,
Failing to reach the distant shore;

Building strategies in mind,
Like building castles in sand,
To be washed away by waves,
As ideas hatched in virtual caves;

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gargi Saha 23 September 2008

Lovely poem written on the sea....... Love &hugs.

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Mamta Agarwal 17 September 2008

a reflective poem, i think ocean does that.waves not reaching the shore like unfulfilled desires is full of sadness. well composed 10

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Kesav Easwaran 15 September 2008

a write reflective...waves/ desires...good simile there...well done 10

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