Walking along the sandy beach,
With waves striding beside me,
In cool morning salty breeze,
Singing Seagulls flying over the sea;
Carrying head load of desires,
Unfulfilled year by year,
Like waves in the sea from far,
Failing to reach the distant shore;
Building strategies in mind,
Like building castles in sand,
To be washed away by waves,
As ideas hatched in virtual caves;
a reflective poem, i think ocean does that.waves not reaching the shore like unfulfilled desires is full of sadness. well composed 10
a write reflective...waves/ desires...good simile there...well done 10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Lovely poem written on the sea....... Love &hugs.