Vision Poem by Krisfian Kynn Ampat

Vision

Rating: 5.0


I lived in a beautiful country
Because of resources it's legendary
People with great hospitality
Gives the country a beauty
But this country is not ordinary
Most problems is about money
Corruption cause poverty
Destroys people's life and property
If the problem will be solved
The country will be free
From criminals and poverty
That help improve our country

Monday, January 30, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: vision
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Chinedu Dike 31 January 2017

An insightful portrayal of a nation blessed with natural resources, ruled by cabals fueled by putrid sludge of kleptocracy, with no political and economic visions to translate into realities. Lovely piece, well articulated and nicely penned in good diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing Kynn.

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Kim Barney 30 January 2017

Let me guess: You live in the Philippines, right?

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