Travelling far again I have returned,
Time and fortune again of mine turned.
I have come to my sister's home to see,
I feel whole day her affection in thee.
I am visiting my sister's home in love,
Meenakshee, my sister is like pure dove.
I am visiting her far in my tender old age,
In old age I write a poem for her in page.
Sage she is now she repeats God's name,
Reading scriptures service she does claim.
Fame she has gained more receiving boon,
In her in-law's village my sister is moon.
Living with her son, daughter-in-law there
To her grand children she truly takes care.
She shares her knowledge to all about God,
Devotional she is to father she does nod.
She has offered me here delicious food,
Good my sister is, remains in nice mood.
My sister is affectionate she is very sweet
She sprinkles her love I am glad to meet.
Sister nIs affectionate and god-fearing. She is distributing love to the entire village folk. She is a messenger of the Almighty. Excellent poem Mahakulbabu. Pl. read my poem Death Came As A Snake and give your valuable comment.
extremely blessed is your sister, to have such a caring, sharing and lovable brother, course we are blessed too to get you over here as as friend, keep sharing superb feel you have brought in, lively perfect 10
A lovely poem, my friend. May you and your entire family enjoy life and love together for many more years
One cannot describe the pleasure one derives from visiting the sisters, I have just one and I can relate to this poem.10++++
Sisterly affection is beautifully expressed in this poem. A responsible brother never forgets his sister even I old age. Who has a sister can feel such affection. This poem is heart touching to me.
What a wonderful brother you are to write a great tribute to your younger sister. Very heartwarming and lovingly penned Every stanza speaks love. Your love has been beautifully expressed and vividly portrayed in this great poem. If I.were your sister I will frame this profound piece of work.10++++
What a sweet poem, Kumarmaniji! I loved reading it. The bond between a brother and sister is very special. Yesderday, was 'Raksha bandhan' a day celebrated all over India. Both you and your sister are similar in many ways. Love is so pure. and the spirit of service to others of greater value. May God bless both the Sister and the brother and shower them with greatest Joy. A full score for this poem, Sir!
Beautiful ode to your sister. The love of a brother for a sister, so wonderfully expressed. She must be an adorable woman. I am sure she is extremely happy and proud of this poem. A great ten, my friend.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A nice gratitude to a great sister, I wish I would have a sister like Meenakshee and I would have written this lovely poem for her.