Vitamin D (Haiku) Poem by Govind Ramakrishnan

Vitamin D (Haiku)



green turtles ambling
in the costa rican sun...
shopping for a tan?

© 2016

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gil Highlander 15 May 2016

The imagery of this haiku is special. A great setting!

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Kelly Kurt 15 May 2016

I love the title. Most people just use the first line of their poem for the title. Sometimes the title takes me longer to write than the poem. This was excellent

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thank you sir. i thought long and hard about this title. i actually saw the turtles on the beach when i was doing an ecology project for my school. It was fun

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Stephen Park 15 May 2016

Another clever composition. I can imagine the turtles lazing around. A perfect 10.

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thank you Stephen, these turtles move so slowly. they look like they are lying out there trying to get some vitamin D

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