Waiting... Poem by Rylan Ollivier
Waiting...
The snowman is silent, without a whisper
The smile on his face o' so sinister
His legs dangle so careless and free
A branch in the wind, a fish in the sea
His mouth lay mute, silent with time
static with age, a shell of a mime
His eyes are dots, showing no fear
Heavily struck by the weight of his tears
The end is near he will finally say
Just one more week, just one more day
'a fish in the sea' is kind of cliche. But I don't know what else would go and rhyme so *shrug* Other than that I liked it. Some nice descriptions and such. Very nice.
so sad.. i pictured out how you describe your snow man.. and i like the idea.. i remembered christmas.. but too bad.. we dont have snow here in the philippines.. take care and GOD bless..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/7/2024 1:27:37 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Great images! and yes, very sad. Poor snowman! Cool! Excellent title!