Waiting Poem by LauraJane O'Sullivan

Waiting

Rating: 3.8


I wait for love
But I never find it
I wait for acceptance
But I’m only rejected
I wait for sunshine
But I only get rain
I wait for a prince
But I find a joker
I wait for a hero, My hero
But I’m killed before I’m rescued
I wait for you,
But your never there
Yet I still wait for love
And wonder if I’ll ever find it
Somewhere, Someday.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Laura-jane O'sullivan 06 June 2009

thank you Morgan, I'm glad you liked it :) and i hope everyone else will like it too :)

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Morgan Millard 06 June 2009

I like the way your poem is quite straight forward, its the best way to communicate that raw feeling - i found your hero analogy striking, good write :)

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