Treasure Island

undiscovered star


waiting! ! !


You let standing in the rain
waiting for you but you never came
the time is passing slow
the rain is droping hard
tick tock drip drop
you havent showed up yet
should i go should i stay
waiting for you in the rain
my hands are shaking
my breath is taken
every minute is passing by
makes me feel colder
my lips are blue
my hair is wet
it makes me feel dead
god make it stop i want to feel worm
the street is empty no voice to hear
i feel lonely there is no sign for a human at all

Submitted: Tuesday, August 06, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, August 06, 2013
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