Waiting For The Bus Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

Waiting For The Bus

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Waiting for the bus,
Waiting for my lover!
Lonely in the cold,
Able to hold on the promise.
Waiting! !
Still waiting,
Checking the time on and off!
Waiting for my lover,
Lonely in the cold.

Monday, January 20, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art,lovers,waiting
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 23 January 2020

Lonely in the cold! ! ! ! Waiting. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always.

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Mahtab Bangalee 22 January 2020

waiting is the bitter feelings if the expected one does not come

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 January 2020

Lovely in the cold! ! ! ! Waiting. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always.

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Susan Williams 20 January 2020

Well done! ! ! You brought back all the heartbreak and doubts and discomfort of Waiting for the Bus and being captive to your doubts and thoughts!

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Edward Kofi Louis

Edward Kofi Louis

Accra, GHANA
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