Edward Kofi Louis

Gold Star - 46,883 Points (13th October 1961 / Accra, GHANA)

A Better Place - Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

Let us love this world and put it in a better shape than hate,
Let us share true love with one another to make the world go round;
For our negative actions will surely lead us to fights and wars,
But true love from us all will make the world a better place.

Comments about A Better Place by Edward Kofi Louis

  • Gold Star - 5,466 Points Bakuli Bhakali (11/6/2015 8:34:00 PM)

    four lines for ages..........well written! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 50 Points Luz Hanaii (10/24/2015 11:13:00 PM)

    This world can use more love, thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,816 Points Ramesh Rai (10/2/2015 6:32:00 AM)

    Great and beautiful message for the world. Lovely thought.10+ (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,382 Points Jr Cuyam (9/28/2015 3:17:00 AM)

    Nice reminder and bold sound of spreading love to the world. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 24,399 Points Liza Sud Russia (9/27/2015 5:48:00 AM)

    you are a good person! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 22,005 Points Melvina Germain (8/15/2015 6:49:00 PM)

    Good things come in small packages and this is a whole lot coming down. I love your words and agree wholeheartedly..... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 50,058 Points Akhtar Jawad (7/31/2015 5:02:00 PM)

    What a great message of of love............................10 (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 755 Points Almedia Knight-Oliver (6/28/2015 5:27:00 PM)

    The world would be a better place if we were to just take the advice of this poem... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 22,005 Points Melvina Germain (6/26/2015 1:41:00 AM)

    Soothing words and Oh I would love to see this come true...Such a Blessing you paint here Edward..... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,262 Points Geetha Jayakumar (6/2/2015 10:21:00 AM)

    A Beautiful poem carrying a fantastic message, let us make our Earth a beautiful place to live in. Poem spreading the message of positivity, peace and love. Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 22,452 Points Lawrence S. Pertillar (5/24/2015 6:01:00 PM)

    Nice poem. I agree. So many live with anger and disppoint as a way of life. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,239 Points Allotey Abossey (5/21/2015 4:29:00 AM)

    The world needs love, but many hate to love or do not know how to love. Great poem Agya Kofi (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 50,058 Points Akhtar Jawad (5/14/2015 7:46:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,218 Points Walterrean Salley (9/17/2014 4:46:00 PM)

    A positive composition, and what we need most - right now. Oh that the world could hear this! . Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Naidz Ladia (12/23/2008 6:06:00 AM)

    love with respect s thebest element on how to live happily in ths earth of ours...love with honesty, love with sncerty and love without bad intentions are all we need to come up with a good relationship between different races...this is just only a poem but ths is treu that happens on human now..thanks for writng ths poem, hope others could see and open their minds to every lines written in ths poem..
    naizz (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Min Sia (12/15/2008 6:25:00 AM)

    Inspiring message of this great poem!

    Truly words were floating like clouds..and so lovely!

    Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (12/15/2008 5:33:00 AM)


  • Rookie - 20 Points Sarah Sisson (12/3/2008 5:56:00 AM)

    Beautiful poetry! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 10, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, May 16, 2010

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