Waiting Room Poem by Donal Mahoney

Waiting Room

Rating: 5.0


First time seeing this doctor,
a specialist. Took a month
to get an appointment.
The waiting room's packed.
I grab the last seat
next to a lady in a wheelchair
knitting something,
perhaps for a grandchild.

I pull out my cell phone
like everyone else
but just to check messages,
not into games.
No one's looking at magazines,
it seems, any more.
It's a cell phone world,
messages and Tic-Tac-Toe.

Half an hour later the lady
stops knitting and whispers,
"Sit back and relax, son.
Life's a waiting room.
We all have appointments.
Every name is called.
Even those who believe
no doctor is in.'

Thursday, December 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: death,god,old age ,religious,social comment
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 17 December 2015

Nice poem with metaphor waiting for turn in life and death. A philosophical undertone in your poem is fantastic....I liked it,10+++

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