Wake Up Poem by Lilly Solares

Wake Up

Rating: 5.0


And then...
your mind felt like it was all over...
and you realized...
that maybe it was not time yet.

And you wished...
everything were different than it is...
that the wind could wash it all away...

And I wished...

Unreal dreams of many colors
life in a place that does not exist
joy of the kind you can only dream of...the one you can't wake up from...
the one you wish were eternal
and then...

I woke up

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 31 March 2016

Unreal dreams of many colors life in a place that does not exist joy of the kind you can only dream of...the one you can't wake up from... the one you wish were eternal and then... waking up in the midst of dreams.......... a contrast between dreams and realities of life.. you are portraying. thank you dear poetess. tony

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Michael Gagliardi 05 May 2010

Sometimes those feelings seem to be lost in a dream...but then other times dreams can be scary places. Very good write.

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