Walk Slow Poem by manaswini dash

Walk Slow

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Oh traveller! walk slow.
Why so hasty to win the show?
Running fast is not the way for quick achievement.
At best it can be called a benefit without any benevolent.
you can not claim it as achievement.
As there was no witness to see that victory moment.
You have left everybody on your way back.
Running and running hastily on stone and rock.
Once, like you, I had also a road in my front.
And I was also running impatiently without count.
Wiping the perspiration and taking rest in between
Under the shadow of my cool household green.
When at the end, I reached my destination
That moment was beyond any description.
Eureka eureka I shouted and shouted.
Overwhelmed with joy I laughed and danced.
But alas!
My joyous sound returned to me as echo.
As I didn't find anybody there to show my ego.
Instead of being happy I tried to compress my rising sob.
While my stoical look was aimlessly swimming in the sky of fog.
Searching for my near and dear ones with a deep sigh.
Who encouraged me to dream for touching the sky.
Only me and my shadow looked at each other.
I had to plant my victory flag with much despair.
So, Hey traveller!
Listen my request and walk slow.
Not alone, but with you your friends and foe.

Thursday, August 9, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: travelling
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 26 September 2018

Only me and my shadow looked at each other. I had to plant my victory flag with much despair.......I find a great poetic beauty in this appreciable expression! Brilliantly penned! (10)

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Manaswini Dash 27 September 2018

Thank you very much for your encouraging comments.

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Rajnish Manga 09 August 2018

Very insightful poem. Says much about human psychology and behaviour. Thanks, manaswini.

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Manaswini Dash 10 August 2018

Dear Rajnish Manga, Thank you very much for your inspiring comment.

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Bisy Untan 09 August 2018

Life is a competitive path till one distinguishes his own ego. Then the speed of life slows down and begins to walk slowly with a sensible mind. Good communication. Congratulations.

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Manaswini Dash 09 August 2018

Thank you Bisy Untan for your nice comment

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Gajanan Mishra 09 August 2018

with friends and foes, life is going upwards

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Manaswini Dash 09 August 2018

Thank you Mr Mishra for your nice comment

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