maitreyee joshi

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#Water


Water is innocent as dew.
It sparkles in the sun like new.

Water is naive and childlike as a river.
It runs along and has no bother.

Water is naughty as waves.
It tickles the feet and plays games.

Water is beautiful as rain,
and washes away all your pain

Water appears wise as a sea.
It's huge and unfathomable as can be.

Water is humble as a lake.
It has beauty simple but not fake.

Water is mysterious when deep.
Its full of fear and gives me creeps.

As a fall, it cascades,
as if breaking barriers and liberates.

As a fountain it adorns gardens and palaces,
and symbolises aristocracy, richness and success.

Water is stagnant and muddy as a puddle,
but has a core to be someone special.

Submitted: Monday, March 16, 2009
Edited: Sunday, May 24, 2009

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Comments about this poem (#Water by maitreyee joshi )

  • Rookie - 364 Points Indira Renganathan (6/22/2009 5:08:00 AM)

    Water is like your imagery...aesthetic at colourful levels...wonderful (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,001 Points Marieta Maglas (6/11/2009 2:43:00 AM)

    a beautiful descriptive poem, by using wonderful similes, like;
    ''Water is innocent as dew''
    ''Water is naive and childlike as a river''
    ''Water is naughty as waves''
    ''Water is beautiful as rain''
    ''Water appears wise as a sea''
    ''Water is humble as a lake''
    10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yoonoos Peerbocus (5/11/2009 12:04:00 PM)

    interesting view on water.....a natural phenomenon so elastic by its composition/ the stanzas pattern suits the theme (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 56 Points Surya . (3/27/2009 12:49:00 AM)

    hi
    beautifull poem on water. congrats.10 for you.
    surya (Report) Reply

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