Water Poem Poem by Fred Babbin

Water Poem

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The ocean, the sea,
The lake, the waters,
black, wine-dark,
grey, green, blue.
The silence,
The silence?
The loneliness,
The hiss of the wind,
The cymbal crash
of the waves
unending..

Write where you can,
when you can,
and do not think
of where or when
you can’t.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mark Nwagwu 14 September 2008

write when you can, do all you can when you can. I'll get going Fred, and write some more poems, seeing you're still active at it, not thinking of when you can't, that is, can't write. Great flow of running words.

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Ency Bearis 23 August 2008

nice flow..great verses... Ency Bearis

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John Tiong Chunghoo 23 August 2008

yes i love this poem fred. good advice.

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