What is love but an ardor emotion
A treasure of the heart
Searching for a true loves kiss, such pure devotion
Wishing to seldom be apart
As I look into your eyes I see our present, future, and past
Your gentle touch and doting kiss sends tingles down my spine
The feeling of forever, a love meant to last
To inspire without reason, O what a sign
You're a song, a dream, a whisper
Now a memory fleeting from my head, once thought so true
Trying to recall how we doused this fire
What once was pure, what was simple, now gone askew
Two hearts once eternally matched
Are now timelessly detached
a good poem in sweet rhyming scheme...good flow of words, Asley...the opening stanza outstanding...10
You are most assuredly a young lady with a gift. Those who encouraged you were correct. The reason for this, is the fact that you make the reading of your lines a pleasure in itself. The best poets have the strange gift you leave the reader wishing for more words. Your word combinations are wonderful and have a melody that is yours alone. I am giving this poem a ten and placing your name on my list for a return. GW62
A very nicely written piece of work on a timeless and eternal theme... Great Work
This is a really great poem a real tear jerker. nice work :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Lovely title and great lines! : 'Your gentle touch and doting kiss', 'Two heart once eternally matched, are now timelessly detached'. I really enjoyed it!