We Are Alive! ! ! Poem by DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK

We Are Alive! ! !



It was out of blue;
A hoax or a truth
Bestirred him nail the clue
And landed him
In captivity of fear blues
Baffled many
By impending glooms
For a day or two
Afraid and suspicious
Loitered around the place
With the helmet on
Day and night through
Parading the place
Like a soldier true
Loosen the helmet if you dare
May end up being a martyr
A subtle device fastened inside
May explode any time
At the substance of which
Souls nearby fear and scream
Bringing life to a standstill
Countdown to get it dislodged
Began by the security with a grill
Ended up getting it fixed
Turned out to be a truth
And could be heard
A deafening noise with intensity
At a distance with a surprise
And could be heard
Outbursts of sighs
Tagged with-we are alive….we are alive
Ah, God you are great and good
That wore the merriment of a kind
Wished and cherished
Now consummated
At the sight of life….! ! !

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A poem of feelings on life when facing death close by but being saved
somehow fortunately by the Almighty............
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 11 February 2014

Many many thanks........Geetha.........I am humbled...........

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Geetha Jayakumar 11 February 2014

A very true feeling you have portrayed...loved reading each lines...A fantastic write..

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Tanmay Kumar Sankhua 09 February 2014

A very powerful poem on life when in fact someone encountering death face to face and fortunately somehow saved.....the feeling of coming alive and the ecstasy of life thereafter...........very nice

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