Fatima Obaid

Rookie - 225 Points (19 Dec / Rawalpindi)

We Can Do - Poem by Fatima Obaid

Little thought leads to little effort
Little effort leads to little change
Little change leads to little happiness
Little happiness can leads to little success
And more thoughts lead to more efforts
More efforts lead to more changes
More changes leads to more happiness
And more happiness leads to a big success.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

a message for every citizen of a country, because now our country needs our efforts not our selfishness.
DO THINK! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Comments about We Can Do by Fatima Obaid

  • Rookie - 4 Points Darkangel Flyfree (10/26/2012 3:16:00 PM)

    That is so true! When you put forth little efforts and thoughts, you get little back. But when you work hard and make those changes, things begin to change the way you want them and then leads to bigger happiness! :) Great poem! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 20 Points Akanksha Bhatt (10/25/2012 10:28:00 AM)

    really very true. i liked it very much..! thanks for the share..! :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Aung Si (10/25/2012 6:41:00 AM)

    Wow.like this an awful lot! Great job! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 25, 2012



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