We Took Off Our Blinkers Poem by buddah boy

We Took Off Our Blinkers

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We took off our blinkers
And we stared into the light
Threw control and caution overboard
And held each other tight
The fetters and the bounds we gripped
Fell from our moistened palms
We spoke with our raw fingertips
We shouted with our arms
Hearts of ours played out the rhythm
Primitive and free
We melded in our frenzy with me becoming we
A hundred thousand fireworks exploded on our skin
We paused we slowed, we breathed once more and then we could begin
The burning heat of our two suns, scalded in caress
Our blood it raced around our course
With passion and finesse
We looked into each others souls
We dared to dive right in
And all the love we built before it led us in a spin
When we digressed and left the path
We never lost the trail
We found our ark of covenant and touched the holy grail
I never thought we'd know this place or how to find our way
I don't know now we've visited, if we will ever stay
In that palatial opulence, and on that hallowed ground
But one thing I attest to, is that we two have found
A trail of glistening stardust,
A moonbeam from the sky
A chocolate star, a shiny cherry
A simple reason why

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Goldy Locks 01 June 2007

hate the rhyming, love the description.. inventive on form alone. keep on, sjg

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