Candle light; weeps to furnish,
The transparency veil; that adds lusture;
Candle overlapped by white customs;
Ah! Standing there at middle joins the lovers:
Candle blaze adds wings to soot;
Soot an unwanted fear: fear of parting, pain;
Carbon soot to strangle bond; but, deep heart radiant to put vow!
All these burns by the candle, weeping and standing in middle there:
Eyes stare each other;
Pierce the grudge layer,
Hands put their owe by crossing there fingers,
In the purple moon light! Ah! Candle weeps to bind heart:
To revive the dead one;
Candle burns; and, at the end;
When Candle top kisses bottom;
It looses soots to fuse fiance in strong love roots!
Poem on candle lights ends at bottom, fantastic
I like this line. Candle light, weeps to furnish, The transparency veil, that adds lustre. Beautiful artwork in overall. 10+, I vote
Yeah here the light of candle makes the two loving souls ONE. nice theme 10+++
nicely ended- When Candle top kisses bottom; It looses soots to fuse fiance in strong love roots! nice 10++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Poetic thoughts on candle. Loved it.
Thanks for appreciating my piece of work.