Weight Of Life Poem by Jolly S Lee

Weight Of Life

Rating: 5.0


My train is not so ordinary
To stop at all stations.
It is not so super fast
To ignore all heavy weights.
I stop,
Where I feel
I recharge me
Energise me
To reach my destination.

Wednesday, September 19, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 12 October 2018

I stop Where I feel I recharge me Energise me.......symbols to denote what life is....... a train and a journey of which you are the master....... lovely thoughts my dear poet. tony

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Jolly S Lee 05 December 2018

Thanks Sir

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Manonton Dalan 20 September 2018

make as many stops as you could and enjoy

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 September 2018

Jolly, such an excellent wtite...............10+++++++++++++

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Jolly S Lee 29 September 2018

Thanks for inspiration.

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Ruta Mohapatra 20 September 2018

'I recharge me Energise me And finish me to ashes'......Great lines! What we make of life depends on ourselves notwithstanding our circumstances.

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Jolly S Lee 21 September 2018

Thanks mam.

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