Weird Places Poem by Nick Hilton

Weird Places

Rating: 4.0


It's not the first time,
That several hours have passed,
Without the noticeing of mine,
That you have know how to run to go fast.

It's not the first time,
That i have realised,
That severed now,
Is the knot which between us ties.

I'ts not the first time,
I've looked out the windows,
And met the glanceing gaze,
Of a stranger as by he goes.

It is the first time,
I've tried to win no races,
And waited till my time will come,
Waited in weird places.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Johnny Golding 22 January 2005

You need to write more about chickens.

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Teddy Samengo 21 January 2005

this is a highaly original poem

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David Mathias 19 January 2005

some misplaced 'e's but still great.

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