i lied in bed next to her, as her life
drained from her body
she was not wishing me goodbye
but was welcoming me home.
home into her heart, where i was
such a big part.
we shared hopes, dreams, memories
and joys beyond compare.
for alongside me she was always there.
together we smelled the roses
and looked up to the skies
seeing clouds forming shapes
and asking ourselves why?
a letter, a note, little things you wrote
a smile, a laughter, little things we did after.
i feel the warmth of your love
filling my every being
touching my soul
and giving me meaning.
now i know just what you meant
that we would never part.
for the truest gift in life is love
which stays within the heart.
Friend, I still wonder on this word love which you had expressed in this page. Anyways your write was soft and touching. Well expressed.
A lovely poem., filled with emotions.. You are a one lucky man she is one lucky woman.. this is a wonderful poem, I enjoyed read this onel, touched my heart.. good 10 with love shan
This one is really beautiful, I know I felt the same feeling with my dying mother. Both souls experiencing the love they had, are sharing and know it will carry on long after. I loved it
Excellent emotion shared here. You have written this out with great feeling and the magic of connection. Very endearing and well written. Nicely done. DC
Louis my friend...when a poet writes from the heart they create such a magical feeling within the reader....you achieved that when you wrote the following i feel the warmth of your love filling my every being touching my soul and giving me meaning. That's the deepest love right there my friend....Excellently expressed 10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Honoured to give you the first of many 10s which you will receive for this love poem that lies so easily on one's mind and reads so freely.Love takes shape in it and flies before us even in the face of death. The emotion of love lives on.