Don't throw your words
On paper
Like wet spaghetti
On the wall.
They may stick
But still be underdone.
Aloha Robert... Bravo! be the critic, extra rdin rius! Spell checkers work wonders, as does the online Webster's... As far as what one's thoughts puke out... it is up to US to determine how material the offering is... in-betweens the lines... on the horizontal or the vertical... i.e. not every culture reads left to right... or in the middle... or center justified... and thinking of what a few snippets of word work implies... think of Ben Franklin, and the shadowy implication of his private letters... I like the title and the geste... impressive write... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You words were clear and concise. RAB