What Did You Do? Poem by john tiong chunghoo

What Did You Do?

'no no i have given
to each of them
seven senses. check
check check on them, '
the maker said.

'yes but this one has
only four and this one
three and this one five, '
the checker replied.

'See whether it has been
placed too near fire
Or if fsomeone has messed
up its inner scheme of things?
a short circuit? Some mess up
the programming?
Too much of one sense
might crowd out the others.
Too much of programming
might get it all haywired too.'
.
'But I think it not only has
lesser sense but is walking
away totally from what it
should be? '






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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Goldy Locks 15 August 2008

Restart and try again....It's probably the backlog of cesspooled bulls*it clogging the circuits/senses. We all have it. Some of us are just more noble - honest - open about it. keep on pal, goldy

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Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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