Lucy Grainger

It's an okay poem I guess. It doesn't matter what the viewer thinks, just the poets feeling put into his/her work's' makes it the best poem ever written. Just think about it, not many people express their feelings through poetry.

~Steve

This is perfect :) you express your love beautifully and this poem itself is beautiful: -) wonderful writing, Luce: P

Not very good really, need to check spelling and qualms is not used correctly

As you can tell, I love it and I'm honored, baby xxx

I like the line where it says hes constantly online in my head. The parrallels and comparisons used once for a sentence is something you do often; you should be proud that you have a style.