What I Feel For You Poem by Christine Angelica

What I Feel For You

Rating: 5.0


I sat down waiting for words
to churn out of me and spill
on the paper, empty and white;
so that the world could know
How I feel of you.

But I waited long and
the sheet remained empty still
somehow depicting
my feelings in the best way,
For what I feel for you
whatever it is;
Is beyond words,
It is beyond worlds.

Monday, November 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: emotion,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Souren Mondal 17 November 2015

'But I waited long and the sheet remained empty still somehow depicting my feelings in the best way, For what I feel for you whatever it is; Is beyond words, It is beyond worlds.' Very interesting lines Christine.. Really liked the way you used the metaphor of an empty sheet.. It works well and expresses the feelings really well... Thank you for sharing..

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Ratnakar Mandlik 16 November 2015

A beaautiful love poem passionately penned with intense emotions. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Rj Masud Reja 16 November 2015

good but try for better : D

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