What I Found On Friday Night Poem by Joshua Erick

What I Found On Friday Night



Laughter on the elevator, missing the floors.
In and out of party doors.

On the roof, in the cool midnight breeze,
smiles and feelings of peace.

We are from different places, different past, aimless life,
changing sights.
Coming together and burning away our stressful lives.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
About my last Friday
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sporadic Hesitation 05 November 2012

Thank you Adeline, I appreciate the help

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Adeline Foster 24 October 2012

Another good one. But perhaps alter the structure. Adeline

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