Nilesh Upadhyay

Rookie (9th march 1986 / Dreamland)

What i get in my mind....vacuum


The time when u asked what i get in my mind
My thoughts moved ahead confused and took back the stride....

The moment i think abt u all bonds break
Realise that happines will drain, sorrows are all fake

Close my eyes i see my mind foraging in dark divine
as i m leaving every relations back wen i luk behind

Its not that i m renunciating worldly deeds
But i sart feeding to what my soul needs

I can see a sun shining at the end of the way
It introduced itself as me, i kept mute nothing to say

HE SAID,
We started togther u left me for worldly things
here i am to get one wid u, i m waiting

I cud not bear that and bring the cure of all sufferings u had in the world
i m happy u met me, so thanks to u oh girl

My mind knows nothing now, its all gone

SO the time u asked wen i thnk abt u wot i get in my mind..
Its the joy of freedom, the vacuum divine inside....

Submitted: Friday, February 27, 2009
Edited: Tuesday, April 21, 2009
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  • Rookie Shashendra Amalshan (5/27/2009 2:10:00 AM)

    well i m so glad that i kno so many great girls, but none dont talk with me, i m such a fool i mean, , ....but i wrote poems for them though, you visitted and read my 'Dying fish and the mermaid'....hope i can have fun talk with them again10++

    hey Nilesh if you have time, come and read my poem 'Devil's hook and heaven's book'
    cheers, have fun with life (Report) Reply

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