the big question...
what is death?
is it pain?
or is it a loss?
what is death?
is it a gain?
or is it trouble?
what is death
or is it doubt?
many say...
at times death can tear u inside out.
cause once u know what it may be
u understand, u truely see
death is nothing but hurt
it makes everything 10x worse
no one knows how u feel
untill u explain what death truley is...
Yes death is a huge pain! ! If you want you could read my poem 'death' which is talking about the same issue...Merna
Perhaps death is new beginning or may be endless and peaceful sleep, who knows.......a good write.........
This is like the poem i wanted to read today...after having experienced a near death situation......yesterday....... good one........liked it.......
i like the idea behind it. not bad at all. the 10x in the poem didn't quite help, and u sometimes gotta check for spelling mistakes. great start tho, urge you to continue writing. u only get better each time u write
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
hmmm...a mystery id say....loved it! !