Sylvia Chidi

Rookie - 151 Points (Germany)

What Is My Destiny? - Poem by Sylvia Chidi

What is my destiny?
What is your destiny?
Can it be changed at all?
Or is it another hallucination
A figment of our imagination,
of what life should hold in stock for us

If destiny would walk our paths
I would say to destiny
Why have you come all this way, just to lead us astray?

Copyright 2005 - Sylvia Chidi


Comments about What Is My Destiny? by Sylvia Chidi

  • Rookie Jay Press (10/31/2006 1:55:00 PM)

    I like this, it staes the flaws in destinys own plan, and questions existence. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Mickey Pig Knuckles (1/14/2006 10:54:00 AM)

    Oh Sylvia, what a poem of reality you have composed here as yes ones destiny can be quite confusing at times but there is a reason for everything and most of the time we do not understand the reasoning. I was drawn into your poetic works by the title and now so glad I was as you have a wonderful writing style that captures and holds your audience through each word. Now, I must Thank You for giving us all a little of you and especially your glowing talent of poetry. Wonderful poem. As I ready myself to part I have a very small request for you. I really want to ask that you please keep your creative pens ink flowing so your wonderful poetry keeps growing. Your Reading Fan, Mickey Pig Knuckles :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Gina Onyemaechi (1/14/2006 9:13:00 AM)

    I like the ending to this: a humorous but worthy probe! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 14, 2006

Poem Edited: Sunday, February 12, 2006


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