*-*what My Mind Said*-* Poem by iron panda 23

*-*what My Mind Said*-*

Rating: 3.0


This person is
stuck in my head
and they wont get out

Theyre the one thing
i keep thinkin about

What to do? ?
what to say? ?
will this go on everyday? ?

They come to my thoughts
from time to time
And then i smile inside my mind

.........

Its every time i think of you
i try to think.....could love be true? ?
If love is true
then this is obvioulsy real
What i see and how i feel

From the heart is where
true love lies
its what i feel for you babe
and it brings happiness to my mind

~IP23

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

True love possess your all! Enjoyed the read.; D

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AWWWWWWWWWW! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! That was SOOOOOOO cute! ! ! ! wow just like wow! ! !

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kitty in love 01 April 2010

wow! ! ! i love this poem... great job 10+++++

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 March 2010

From the heart is where true love lies its what i feel for you babe and it brings happiness to my mind.............................................IT IS WHAT OUR MIND SAYS OR REACTS TO THE TRUE LOVE.. IT KNOWS THE FEELING AND FEELS THE PULSE OF IT... SO NICE AND FINE PIECE....10 READ MINE... I MISS... ANYWHERE/.....

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