M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 120,158 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

What We Do! ! ! ! ! ! ! - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

We talk more say less
Hence we fail in our deeds.

We think more act less
Hence we miss the opportunity’s bus.

We hear more listen less
Hence we create confusion and chaos

We forget more remember less
Hence friendship and relations are strained.

We empty more fill less
Hence we are hollow and vacant inside.

We conceal more reveal less
Hence we find in doldrums, our trust and faith

We take more give little
Hence charity is not done and we suffer.

We leave a lot unsaid undone
Hence our emotions flow through eyes and heart suffers.

We turn love into a mental illness
We pretend
We deny
And then we regret forever.

Topic(s) of this poem: motivation

Form: Couplet


Comments about What We Do! ! ! ! ! ! ! by M. Asim Nehal

  • Darren Jkoeryo (12/20/2015 2:20:00 AM)


    Very nice poem...............10+++ (Report) Reply

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  • Khalida Bano Ali (9/28/2015 1:26:00 AM)


    We turn love into a mental illness
    We pretend
    We deny
    And then we regret forever.................wonderful.....................10 (Report) Reply

  • T Rajan Evol (8/30/2015 1:45:00 PM)


    Wonderful.................10 (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag Sanjukta Nag (8/30/2015 2:31:00 AM)


    A poem full of truth..covered many things of our lives.. liked it (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 29, 2015



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