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When

When time was my friend, I'd lollygag and laze
It was all in front of me I had so many days
When time never entered the passing mind
And I thought I had all the time
When....

When lines were not on my face, just spots
And I was handsome in my ways and looks I had not lost
When fat had not encircle me, and I was young and tight
And muscular I was not and never ventured into fight
When....

When all my loved ones were there and all were counted true
And I had not found anyone and not thought of you
When loss was something that had never shown
And sharing caring was in abundance and death was never known
When....

When I found love and shooed it away, only to find again
And I was tender in the time and my goodness you could depend
When I gave you and you gave me and we just shared and shared
And I thought I would always be the one who always cared
When....

When I realized that looking back was not the way
And I was not back there but here today
When I knew that mortality would grasped my breast
And take me down into the Death
When....

Submitted: Saturday, February 02, 2013
Edited: Saturday, February 02, 2013


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  • Lusty Fashion (2/8/2013 9:23:00 PM)

    nice poem. From reading your poem, i can tell that there is a mine of memories burried within ur chest.

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  • Gajanan Mishra (2/2/2013 9:00:00 PM)

    Loss was something that had never shown. thanks.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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