When I die...
let my body burn.
Deposit my ashes,
inside my sepulchral urn.
Taken to the riparian of forlorn;
on the littorals so adorn.
As the wind will turn,
open my urn.
Let me be,
and set me free.
Let me fly,
when I die...
not bad but i'm not sure about some of the words like sepulchral urn, it kind of sounds a bit dated but nevertheless it's alright.
That was really good. .: : .Death drives people To do the impossible To talk to those Who can’t respond To cry over one Who cannot comfort To leave behind The life they knew.: : . -Dawn
'let me fly when i die'....such an intense plea... i liked this one... Asma...
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I would like to translate this poem
When I die I'd like to live your poem Joshua, achieve peace and freedom that life could not provide - C e r a s R a y n -