When(I'M Without You, With You Is Where I'D Rather Be.) Poem by Samuel finley

When(I'M Without You, With You Is Where I'D Rather Be.)

Rating: 5.0


When I close my eyes, you're the first thing that I see.
When I think, you're the first thing that I think of.
When I smile, you're the immediate suspect of the deed.
When I dream, you're what I always hope to dream of.
When I'm with you, nothing can come between us.
When I'm without you, with you is where I'd rather be.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Moriah Zentz 08 November 2011

I love this one! :) Keep it up!

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Romeo Della Valle 15 May 2011

A well crafted and poignant write! 10+++ Keep it up, you got what it takes to make it through the Poetry's World, talent! Love and Peace for always! ...

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