(30.04.1984 / South East, London)

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When I Was a Child

When i was a child, i thought they could do no wrong
When i was a child, everyone seemed to get along
When i was a child we were always together
When i was a child, i thought it would last forever
When i was a child, playing with my cousins was always fun
When i was a child, my face always brightend by the beautiful sun
When i was a child, i was young and free
When i was a child, no pain or worries i could see
When i was a child, i learned from my mistakes
Now i am an adult, now my heart breaks

Submitted: Saturday, March 18, 2006


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  • Nazik Aziz (7/3/2008 5:34:00 PM)

    this pome is very nice

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  • Brian Dorn (6/25/2007 2:54:00 PM)

    Wow, what an abrupt ending... very well done, Nicola! !
    Brian

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