Vidi Pudinkz

Rookie - 20 Points (Jambi, Indonesia)

When Love Disappeared - Poem by Vidi Pudinkz

Taught me to fight the storm
Even though you were crashed
Bled and hurt by thunder
Standing to show the smile

You had the candle of love
Shining me like a flame
Warm in spite of the snowstorm
Hiding your feeling of cold

There was no heat anymore
The snow came and slept
Freezing the dream of love
To be vanished and disappeared

It was hard to find you
The loneliness darkened my sight
Tears dropped suddenly
Frozen before falling down

When the fault it was
The storm couldn't be stopped
Brought the candle of love away
Out of the sphere of life

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  • Rookie - 444 Points Niamat Ali Murtazai (2/1/2011 10:42:00 AM)

    It is av good poem based on experience. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, February 1, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, February 2, 2011


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