A promise of love came at twilight,
Knocking upon this beggar's door,
I stood trembling as it let itself in,
Its charity shook me to the core
Love opened the door and we embraced,
And a sweet voice spoke to my soul,
Tears begin to fall as I remember
Love's tender words starting to unfold
Love told me I'd be Queen forever,
Eternal love would mark my reign,
Those words settled snugly inside my heart,
Loneliness departed with its pain
Then I watched the door slowly closing,
I knew love was here to stay,
Its wandering days had come to an end,
Now, together we greet each new day
From books and teachers I learned of life,
But nothing prepared me for
The thrill and wondrous joy that I felt
When, so gently, Love opened the door
May this courtship remain ever lasting! A nice, soothing poem.10/10.
Love's tender words starting to unfold... they do it the finest in your poems.
From books and teachers I learned of life, But nothing prepared me for The thrill and wondrous joy that I felt When, so gently, Love opened the door.... You have personified Love here. i imagined as i read your poem that Love as a beloved person stands at your door. yes it is thrill, it i s joy, it is tremendous happiness if you at all meet with a real love. God bless you to meet this love in your life.
Beautiful poem. Loved the contiguous courtship. Enjoyed. Top score.
The poet says, 'From books and teachers I learned of life' but I forgot everything when love opened the door. A unique poem. Loved the liquid movement of words from top to bottom. A fabulous poem.
Beautiful depiction of Love's voyage of pure bliss crafted in persuasive poetic expressions. An awesome rendition that resonates with the soul. Lovely poem, a smooth flow for joy. Thanks for sharing Lora.
So! ! ! Love finally came. and WHEN shall you wake up? to June's all-female showcase in 2017. almost better than getting love! ! ! ALMOST. Thanks. bri to MyPoemList as well.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Not long ago, after bitter disappointment, I had locked the door very tight. Yet, love still found a way to open the door. The last two lines are so very true.