When Suicidal Becomes Suicide Poem by Abby Wesson

When Suicidal Becomes Suicide



Thick black lines with heavens
embrace
It's hard to tell its hell I
face
Condemed to die a sinners
love
A conceiled tear from someone
above
One slice of anger out flew
fear
Secretly killing the one held so
near
Last white linen covered the
stain
But couldn't mask this child's hidden
pain

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ann Thrope 14 August 2006

it says i have to enter 20 characters. so.. a-freaking-mazing, miss wire. <3

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Chantelle Clark 10 August 2006

Hey Rebecca, this is a really really good poem, I really like it because I can connect to it. Thank you.

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 09 August 2006

That's a touching poem, I hope that child is going to be alright. great work Rebecca, smiles N hugs, Rissa

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