alyssa swensen


When The Rain Falls Down - Poem by alyssa swensen

when the rain falls down it awakes my dream
when the rain falls down it washes me clean
when the rain falls down it screams my scream
when the rain falls down it follows me
when the rain falls down it carrys me
when the rain falls down it unties me
when the rain falls down it talks to me
when the rain falls down im comin clean
when the rain falls down. down on me.
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Comments about When The Rain Falls Down by alyssa swensen

  • Rookie Alyssa Swensen (1/5/2012 10:42:00 PM)

    Thank You So Much! i really appretiate it, :) (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 139 Points Romeo Della Valle (9/13/2011 7:34:00 PM)

    Through the Rain you were able to get inspired and write this well penned and poignant as living proof of your poetic talent and impress the World! This your first posted poem has indeed become your stepping stone into the Poetry World! Welcome Alyssa! Here we are waiting to read more of your thought provoking writes! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 7, 2011

Poem Edited: Thursday, January 5, 2012


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