Corey Day

Rookie (July 15,1996)

When The Wind Stops Blowing - Poem by Corey Day

And the snow stops falling.
When the stop starts going,
And the crow stops calling.

When the circle gains an edge,
And the muscle loses strength.
When the coward learns courage,
And the snake loses length.

When the teachers cease to educate,
And the coaches cease to coach.
When the needle won't sedate,
And the man's killed by the roach.

When the winners never win,
And the losers begin to gain.
When the fish disowns it's fin,
And the fire burns the rain.

When the water leaves the bay,
And the 'to' divorces 'fro, '
Well, this will be the day
When the wind will cease to blow


Comments about When The Wind Stops Blowing by Corey Day

  • Rookie Corey Day (5/17/2013 7:30:00 AM)

    thanks guys! ! ! you are so supportive and awesome! ! ! ! ! ! ! :) (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 32,733 Points Gajanan Mishra (5/14/2013 8:28:00 AM)

    fire burns the rain, fine writing, thanks.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,247 Points Unwritten Soul (5/14/2013 8:00:00 AM)

    A clean write, nicely done...the flows just undeniable good..so the meaning..keep it up for next piece_Soul (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 14, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 14, 2013


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